Would anyone be interested in an E-rated version of my last story? · 7:04am Aug 9th, 2019
I'm thinking about doing an E-rated version of Sunset's Messy Adventure. With the following differences:
1.) All the Equestria Girls go to the new world, not just Sunset. Thus the wam (wet and messy) is split between them.
2.) The desert scene is omitted since it was there for Sunset to sweat for two days and smell bad before the swamp. (though I will keep the smell of the swamp water and fish, since the smell stuff on its own isn't suggestive and has been done a few times in the show)
3.) The sewage will be omitted, as well as anything wetting or messing, and wedgies, and the girls will defeat the Dazzlings on arrival at their castle.
And a few more differences that can be a surprise to anyone who would read it if I publish it.
Does anyone think this would work out as a good pure wam story without the wetting, messing, etc. getting in the way? Or would it interest even less people than the original?
Also, should I put Sunset in the same outfit as the original or do something more along the lines of Legend of Everfree?
That is a good idea
Another question: Should I make ponying up dry clean them right away or keep the bath scene, and say it's enough to get the swamp water and fish smells out (not saying yet which ones fall victim to this).