New snippet and first editor · 2:33pm Jul 2nd, 2019
"Finally!!! Out of the cave!!"
I yelled at the afternoon sun in a astoran pose
As I walk back to where I came from, I saw some pretty big paw prints on the ground: looks fresh.
"Hmmm... Probably that cat I wrecked.." I said to no one as I continue on my merry way. After all: I got the stuff I came for that cave in the first place.
As soon as I near the town I saw the the same big red freaky lion I met a few hours ago ( the red palm mark on his ass is my handiwork anyway) and it seems to be talking (growling) at someone..
"Hey there ya juicy kitty!! You want another ass slapping??" I yelled at the cat which made it jump a few feet in the air before landing and facing me with pure terror on its features.
I gave the cat a toothy grin which made it jump back and hide behind a butter yellow pegasus. And trying its hardest to fit behind her tiny rump
And the owner of said rump gave me a angry gaze.
"Hello there miss shy! You know that cat?"
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Soooo yeah...
Someone decided to finally step in and volunteer to be our editor for this fic
Everyone: meet Mr. PlayBitz
If we're lucky, me and our editor can make improvements on this fic (that I never thought would took off like it did.. (Went past 200 likes with a bang) and hopefully, be featured on this website's front page
Thank you
Moar please
Hello Mr PlayBitz. I hope it does get featured so more people can see this awsome fic.