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Mr Dorito


Anime is Japan's revenge for Hiroshima

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  • 136 weeks
    Title

    So I have a few ideas of what could be better for my RWBY fic

    -Day of Judgement

    -Cursed Remnant

    -Harsh Reality

    -Judgement Comes

    Which title do you guys think is better?

    0 comments · 148 views
  • 141 weeks
    Ay bruh

    This Star Wars fanfic gonna be lit. Gonna start it off with a banger.

    1 comments · 247 views
  • 141 weeks
    Narcolepsy

    Fairly certain I have narcolepsy after having my first sleep paralysis moment. Evident with my constant need to sleep every day when the sun is up.

    Probably should’ve disclosed it earlier. It wasn’t just school and jobs that hindered updating my fics, but also I’m constantly void of energy and having the desire to sleep.

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    2 comments · 204 views
  • 141 weeks
    Fanfiction

    Need your opinions on this. It’s clear the idea of Soldier of Three Armies wasn’t suited for a crossover. In fact, making it a crossover with MLP made it worse in my opinion.

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    11 comments · 415 views
  • 142 weeks
    Theme for General Hassan Alraml

    The true heir to the throne of Vacuo, the man who destroyed the Atlesian 6th Army, the Guardian of Vacuo and the Bane of Atlas

    Putting this here because I have a bad habit of forgetting things. Yes that includes writing down notes for ideas for my RWBY fanfic. The song’s just so fucking good.

    6 comments · 154 views
Apr
22nd
2019

Nice OCs guys · 4:21am Apr 22nd, 2019

Love them and I'll try to find a place for every single one of them.


Wasn't expecting those responses though. I'm short of pony OCs which I need the most.

I have one spot open for the commander of the new Equestrian Brigade stationed in the Everfree. Someone to compete with Colonel Winslow.

The rest of the submitted pony OCs, I'll find roles for them as well.

EDIT: Probably need more ponies who are completely loyal to the Equestrian throne.

Comments ( 6 )

Divinity Nocturne Adminmus
Bat pony
Female
Joined guard at 18 reached 2nd lieutenant by 26
She is a religious mare to a extent very mission oriented however she has sympathy for humans she wont let that get in the way of her job
(My idea dont know if its okay to post here)

5047937
It's fine. It's good to have characters like that.

Name: Arbalest Balista

Nickname: Aria

Gender: Male

Species: Earth Pony

Rank: Corporal(E-4)

Description:

-Earth pony, larger hind legs than front however the front legs are stronger and more lithe.

-Vinyl-like brown coat, marine eyes and dark black hair.
(If used, character appearance may be changed at will)

-emotional detatchment on the battlefield.

-predjudiced against non-pony species.

-general dislike of unicorns.

-lack of faith in the monarchy but performs his duties actively.

-his opinion is rock solid however may be subject to change after arduous attempts at coersion(last time it took him a year to change his mind)

-sturdy built, dexterous body, abnormal pain tolerance.

-inability to properly use military martial arts(e.g. Krav Maga) instead he slips into a less agile, stable karate stance and technique. While he is proficient in this art, he is far inferior in terms of ccq to most soldiers.

-main weapon: spear with chain{2m circular shield enchantment(2 uses @ 8s each)}

-weapon proficiency: 8/10

- Ccq proficiency: 6/10

- Runic knowledge(mostly useless as runes require mana to activate, unless mana gathering ruens are used but those take days to properly charge) : 9/10

-Knowledge on mechanics: 7/10

-Creativity: 5-8/10

5047952
Story is anthro and they use modern weaponry

Awareness: 0/10


Jk I'll modify your OC accordingly, thank you.

5047963
Noted, due thanks is offered.

Honestly its been a while since I've read this story, must've either flown over my head or it has indeed been that long.

Y'all need a few more pony oc's, well I can cook up one for you right now.

Name: Frost Bite
Race: pegasus
Gender: male
Size: 5f, 6in tall, 134 lbs.
Coloration: light icy blue coat, white mane and tail with medium blue streak to the left side of both mane and tail.
Cutie mark: dark cloud with snowflakes and wind lines.
Backstory: Hails from a small town in the far North of Equestria, but before the Crystal Empire, the village mined iron and frost crystals from the nearby mountains and grew root and tuber vegetables. He gained his cutie mark while fighting a sudden blizzard that threatened the crops and railways. Like other pegisi, he has the standard weather manipulation but instead of being able to make thunder clouds, he makes snow clouds, and can use them to start blizzards. When an off duty royal guard came to town to visit family some years later and heard of the young pegasus, he talked him into joining the guard/ E.U.P. when he became of age. Loyal to a fault, he will fearcely defend his country and its citizens.
Parts can be changed as needed for the story, hope this little guy can help your story.
P.S. literally just made this up as I wrote this comment.

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