Revisions and Chapter 11

Well, I reached out to someone I know and found a very talented editor. You know who you are, ups for you if you're reading this. Thanks to them, I'm going to be making revisions to all chapters to improve their readability and iron out anything odd that crops up. No major changes, but they should be cleaner to read for newcomers and perhaps more enjoyable if you reread the story. Good stuff!

Secondly, I'm working on chapter 11. This is most likely the last chapter. I think you'll still find plenty in it to like, though.