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ShadowStar_IMHP


I'm a writer of fanfictions. Of course being an amature I have spelling and grammar errors.

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  • 32 weeks
    I just don’t have the drive anymore

    I tried o really did. However it just not there anymore.

    I just don’t have the desire to write. I deleted the story “Me, Myself, and I” because it just had two chapters.

    I’m resetting the story “Mother Moon, Fallen Sunset” to canceled.

    Sorry for all those that followed me, the spark of writing just not there.

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  • 38 weeks
    Sorry for taking so long

    One of the reasons I stopped writing was that I had far less time on my hands. Not only am I now working full time, I have no one at home doing housework. So all that dirty laundry, dishes, and yardwork falls on me. My sister lives with me but is almost as lazy as Zephyr Breeze (JK). She's a great teacher; she's always working on a project for her class or crafting.

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  • 43 weeks
    I have the names for my OC.

    The three heads for my Chimera would be named. Wynken Blynken and Nod for the old Lullaby.

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  • 43 weeks
    Yup it's official I'm writing Me, Myself, and I instead of the other story.

    I just spent the Fourth of July writing, and I already have a higher word count than the other story I'm working on. The chapter reaches 1900+ words, and I still have more to do. The updated paid Grammarly has some nice features that make finding those pesky grammar errors easier.

    It seems I got it done today! Well, July 5th at 1:am my time.

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  • 43 weeks
    I hate my muse. Really sometimes it like my muse is drunk.

    It will be a little longer than I thought for the story of another entity in Luna's body with Nightmare Moon and Luna herself.

    I have to write up a more detailed outline. I realized I had an exciting start but didn't have a story arc.

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Jan
7th
2019

Why!!!! Did they have Luna speak Shakespeare English? · 5:16pm Jan 7th, 2019

I have enough trouble with modern English grammar. Now I have to use Shakespeare’s English to be faithful to Luna in my story.

Almost want to hit the person that came up with it for Lunar Eclipse. I’m glad they dropped that gimmick in later episodes.

My problem is my story taking place before that Episode. Worst is I have some flashbacks to include.

Wait... How come in Shadow Play none of the past Ponies didn’t speak old English? Not one thee or thou from Starswirl.

Comments ( 2 )

I'd assume because it's that the period of English Luna speaks in (Which is more between Modern and Middle English than Old English, since Shakespearean English was a bit weird even in it's time) was reserved for nobility. Most of the common folk and minor nobility would speak in what we would consider close to a common modern British English vocabulary. But its also annoying as all heck to write for people who didn't study the period and poetry.

It also just takes practice :/ but I don't blame you for hating it.

So let it be, nothing needs to be changed. Let her tell it like it is. I'm just a fan of shakespeare's works, recently read about him, you can click over here if you want. Just take Romeo and Juliet, that's just something. I've also re-read Julius Caesar many times. This author's story is unique, all the more amazing that his story has survived to this day.

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