Rewrite coming · 6:14pm Jan 5th, 2019
Hey, I've been talking to my editor, and after some deliberation, I have decided that I will be doing a rewrite, more specifically with the first chapter. After getting a review for it my editor and I realized that I might have done a little too much or an exposition dump in the first chapter. So it was decided that to fix this I will need to redo the first chapter to put the readers more directly into the action of the story to draw them in. Hopefully this helps with the exposure of the story and makes it more enjoyable for you guys.