Story status update: some more (sort of...) rereading, error correction and comment removal ahoy. Also: chapters.

As I promised, all of the steps to take before publishing are processed. Publishing, however...

When I tried to review what I had written so far, I... I couldn't do it in one take. Almost 17 000 words! So a decision was made to... split the would-be one-shot into chapters! The first one is already published (though the story itself is not yet submitted), the second is awaiting a reread. Will there be a third one? Huh... Anyway, I figured, somewhat shorter chapters would be better to read, than a somewhat long one-shot. So, stay tuned, as they say!