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11 weeks
Two-Wicked Candle

Its been in progress for a very long time, as I've mentioned before, but the more I push on with new chapters, the more unacceptable the initial chapters become. I got lost in the sauce of the latest chapter, bringing back an old friend (and the complications of planned then rescinded design changes), but I really need to focus back on the original chapter rewrites. You might think this is
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40 weeks
Writers Block Over (maybe)

As explained in my last blog entry, I hit a wall after writing an entire chapter that took the sisters' journey in the wrong direction. Since then, I have been stuck on how to reconcile this error; do I rewrite the entire chapter I was proud of, or compromise my greater vision of the story?
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49 weeks
TToTS Ch.22: When Disaster Strikes

Oh boy. So, some time ago (sadly not dated because I didn't finish it) I decided to write Tirek/Scorpan's backstory, waiting for a point to insert it. I decided that Chapter 22 was a good a time as any, placing it as a filler while the sisters passed through the Lowlands Forest. Before continuing the (let's call it Tau) backstory, I wanted to keep the momentum of the real journey flowing, so I
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51 weeks
Flight of the Valkyrie, Complete

Well, not quite.
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60 weeks
FotV Ch.1 Updated

In my pursuit of rewriting Chapter 1 of TToTS (having now finished the Prologue), I accidentally rewrote Chapter 1 of FotV, slightly recontextualising Star's landing and Twilight and Star's behaviour to be more in line with later chapters (the first chapter was three years old!). It's up to you whether you want to reread it; it's 800 words longer, but nothing really different happens. I may
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2018

TToTS: Chapter Two Heavily Updated · 10:47pm Jun 9th, 2018

I have just released a major update to Chapter Two of The Tale of Two Sisters. I wouldn't announce a typical change, but this has been a significant addition. To aid the flow of the story and create a more fulfilling arc per-chapter, I have divided a significant portion of the unreleased Chapter Three to append Chapter Two with over 1,300 words, making the chapter over a third longer. I am sincerely hoping that people who have already read Chapter Two will not overlook this addition, as you will be missing out on a pretty significant event.

Unfortunately this change of plans means that Chapter Three will need to be rethought; either extended by merging what little exists of Chapter Four, or writing over a thousand words of new content... But that's my problem, not yours.

Thanks for reading this post, but more important, thank you for reading my story!
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TToTS Ch.22: When Disaster Strikes

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FotV Ch.1 Updated

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