Mar
11th
2018
Shattered; More Feedback · 6:52pm Mar 11th, 2018
Okay, so we're not done with the story yet. Not yet.
But I want to ask, do you all think its still moving decently?
And before anyone asks, yes, I know that what is brought up in the current chapter is questionable; but I'd like to say again, that this is an alternate universe so things are gonna be a bit different, and adding on that, I do have explanation for what you've read. I'm gonna make sure things get explained.
But in the meantime, I want to ask do you think its still going alright? Mostly?
Still my only complaint, it shattered glass, the rainbooms will still win.
I think it's going pretty well. I look forward to seeing where it goes next!
What happened that it made it so questinable?
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I'd say read the story but considering you don't want to especially... basically I nearly shot myself in the foot with an explanation for how a certain group gained specific powers.
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Which group? The Rainbooms?
Just after I posted my comment/review on the newest chapter a thought popped into my head.
The Sirens are attending CHS, and all schools teach History. What would happen, if in the current years curriculum, an image of the Sirens showed up in a history book? Amusingly with no aid/interference from the Rainbooms, but rather just pure chance.
Is progressing well I look forward to the ending