Feel free to toss ideas. (what do you want to see from me?) · 12:17am Oct 22nd, 2012
Right, I'm very slowly inching towards releasing a couple of more stories. Just wanted to know what people actually watch me for. Like, suggest content you either like, or would want to see me take a gander at. And sorry for lack of stuff overall, been hectic lately.
Currently near release are:
Complete but not proofread: 1: CMC 18+ story (foalcon) 2/4 chapters done. First attempt at a story with continuity, sort of. 2: My long ass overly violent and fucked up Psychoshy FoE story. 3: Short ass unrelated FoE story. 4: Yet another FoE story, this also PH related, showing a .. very random ship between a sentient suit and it's wielder. Honestly forgot about that one... (might be one more, but I think it's only those two)
WiP: 1: Teenage Twi working a gloryhole. 2: "Spa story" (with "happy ending)
On Hiatus: Sore in the night.
So yeah, toss stuff at me if you feel like it :P
And as always: Open for questions and whatnot one might have about anything really. (and yes, I am up late writing again.)
If you need a proofreader for the CMC story, I'm available.
Other than that, keep doing what you're doing.
You seem to have a knack for male humiliation. I don't know what it is about your writing style, but you really bring out my masochistic side.
You've already covered male rape before, but I'd like to see you tackle a forced cuckolding. Choose a canon married couple or some pairing of characters, (like the fillies and colts grown up).
Have the husband tied up and forced to watch his wife be sexually assaulted. (It could be one intruder, a gang of stallions or a gang of mares.)
A gang of mares would be interesting. A mare on mare gang rape isn't often seen, even in this fandom.
The main focus would be on humiliating the stallion and his utter helplessness to save his wife.
I don't know how you feel about the whole 'mind break' thing; where the rape victim begins to enjoy and even encourage her violation. I don't think it's needed, but it's always an option to pursue when writing.
Well, those were my thoughts. You any that you feel you can work with.
438960 My mind might have fizzled, but didn't you already offer to proofread some while back? Or am I mixing up people again? xD Or did I forget to link?
And okies. Will try and keep it up. Honestly just been randomly and wildly trying out topics and subjects xD
As for that... I blame the lack of it in the fandom. I wouldn't mind being more varied, but due to my autism, it is made as obsolete and counterproductive to even bother with anything "non-abnormal" heh.
I could consider that. In any type or form. Male gang is ruled out unless the wife is the one being tied up and forced to watch. Otherwise it'd be far to bland and generic. Not to mention ... brain fizzle again, but going with "degrading" or "sexist". Since first off, males raping a female? That's totally not 90 % of the ocassions. Secondly, it would just play on the whole "men have to protect their wives" concept. Role reversal there could work as said, but then it'd just feel like I am "gender swapping" things and doing "the same" like everyone else...cept for the fact I am making something different from the rest in the large scale. Anyhow, might be interesting with a mixed gender gang. And possibly a male or male+female voyeuristic in said gang. Just to be creative. Pulling a "fanon sexual Spitfire+Soarin" so to speak, if you know of that one. (her getting off on him fucking others and getting himself off. But reversed ofc, the male just sitting there appealed/amused by the mares/stallions/mix rutting the x while the y is forced to watch. Having their despair from watching their y raped just add to their perverse delight.)
And I did technically have mind breaking in P-21, he is broken in the last part, as per canon. Or well, he doesn't enjoy it, but he just does it like a drone. Actually co-oped on a story like that, no idea where that went though... but had one of each gender being broken down actually skillfully, not just the stupid ass way of herp or derp. (just going to guess you know of the "illogical" stories where they just start liking it for a stupid or no reason whatsoever. "Just cuz'"
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Sure.
One other thing to consider is to not go from the "husband must protect wife" standpoint. You could have a dark retelling of Appaloosa. The bison, enraged that they have been driven off of their sacred land, seek revenge on the pony devils.
Braeburn and Sheriff Silver Star would be tied up and forced to watch as the tribe of bison kill the stallions and rape the mares. Chief Thunderhooves could even be the one to personally rape the Sheriff's wife in front of him. You could include lots of schlocky tropes, like scalping the stallions or something.
That's one idea, but I know you said you wanted to avoid the "males rape females" story, as it's too generic.
So, to go in a different direction, something involving Ahuizotl could be interesting. He's got a hand for a tail, for crying out loud! I know there's possibilities with this guy. The fact that he's only appeared in a book ca be tricky, but you could always have Twilight summon him, or something. What happens after that, I don't know. I just know we could use more Ahuizotl.
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The first reply didn't answer anything really xD Ah well, will provide links for those fics.
And not to be like that, but now you basically went with telling another overly generic and bland concept as to "oppose" the prior generic and bland story
No offense, but sometimes you really seem to miss a point :P It's like... I ask for ideas for a "swingers party" for something the husbands could do with each others to please their wives visually. And you suggest "have the wives have a daisy chain to eat out their husbands cum from each others!" it's like... yes, it is on the same topic, but you missed the main point of it. Granted, I tend to fail to explain stuff. But quite sure I wasn't that off with this one xD I did state the one thing I would not do was the "male gang rape" concept as it is the most overused and worn out topic when it comes to that type of porn, and you suggest a second male gang rape concept with the same base content. As said, I just find "stereotypes" to be too boring and predictable to work with.
And reading bellow part, I do have to make a mental note to start reading the whole comment before replying
But to my defense, I've seen these types of responses a dozen times before. (not solely from you ofc, just speaking this site in general) Anyhow, I can have males raping females, as long as it's doesn't follow all the "guidelines" so to speak. Buffalo idea could have been done, seems a tad bit too "messy/long" for my current schedule though. But if I'd done it, would likely have been "mixed genders" in both sides. Prolly no killing, but possibly scalping. And could totally see Strongheart and/or the chief tag teaming Breaburn/Silver heh. And on a side note, went of trailing mentally about changelings... seen "that" drawing of Chrysalis by ECMajor? Basically trailed off with that and the "monsters kidnap women for reproduction" myths, cept with Chrysialis being a hive queen, it would be males taken, and possibly grimdark tagged... could have been interesting to see how well I could make males cringe. Then again, not sure if I'd want to end up as "that girl" doing stories like that 
He could deffinatly be a interesting character to use. Even if just being in a book... and have to say I got a ton more "silly" ideas for how to "use" him rather than using him in "good" ways
I blame Oglaf for this.