Dec
22nd
2017
Update Focus · 12:20pm Dec 22nd, 2017
Hello everyone! Just gonna let you all know what I’m gonna focus on within these next few weeks, when I have a chance. Here are the top five coming up:
1. A Thousand Lessons
2. Freeblade and the Nurse
3. Commissioned Story by two Patrons, combined together into one(since they asked for the EXACT SAME THING and time isn’t my friend).
4. His Rose, Her Master.
5. Wolf and the Rainbow.
That is the list of the next five stories I will focus on at least one chapter of, in order. So, hope you are all excited!
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The-Black-Knight · 401 views
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You really need to make loyalist space marines more like they are in 40k. Because they are zealots to the imperial creed, not even once have l seen them pray to the emperor. And when they change their form to a xeno they are fine with it, HOW?
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The ones I have done so far have all been veteran Deathwatch members who’ve recently returned back to their Chapters. Augustus DID have a freak out, in classic Ultramarine fashion and consulted the Codex about it. Each had a reaction of their own, and they each hold their own personalities. Not all are zealous, as you claim. Example, Salamanders are NOT zealous and are, in fact, very level headed. Space Wolves are considered savage and barbaric, but it hides their own sense of calm and keen intellect. Ultramarines vary, but the Blood Angel Azress ALSO freaked, but did it how his creator(Shadow_2777) claimed he would react. Even Ter’ron had a freak out of his own.
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I mean no disrespect l like your stories l really do, but over 10,000 years of hatred towards xenos mutants and heretics are just thrown out off the window. I still believe that emperor has not given orders to spare them and that one ho we see as a emperor is a demon, just like in Horus heresy book Ruinstorm, where Sanquinius goes thru warp portal where he sees visions of him been killed by Horus over thousand times and one where he kills him after that he is in imperial palace confronted by the emperor ho tells him that he is savior of imperium. Sanquinius almost falls for this but emperor could not be there sou he takes his sword and hits his father only in a last second be turned to a greater deamon. Its a perfect plan from Tzeentch, it takes loyalist turn them to a xenos sends them to far of system sou chaos could move without eny meaning full resistance. And they cannot come back either because they would be shot as xenos and traitors. Of course this is your stories and you writhe them as you please, mayby its just me because recent times l have read a lot of 40k books and audiobooks.
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Space Marines don't always (but a lot do) worshipped the Emperor of man as god. Many of them see him as he wanted them to see him. A man(who was still powerful enough to challenge Gods, but tolatly isn't a god), a Man who had reached The pinnacle of human Protential.
also space Marines in these stories, have had problems with their forms. But becoming a pony in Warhammer is the Least problematic thing you can be turned into, in Warhammer. Warhammer fantasy (and maybe 40k) You could have your skeleton pop out of your body (while you were still alive) scream at you and run for the hills, while you're left there on the ground (still alive) a literal sack organs and blood. So being turned into a Adeptus Astartes equivalent of a pony is the least of their worries.
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that is true cant argue with that. Maybe its just how l see space marines and because my favorite chapter are black templars, no that actually explains a lot . Just thinking out loud that what is better to defend a nation 2.5 meter big space marine with power armor or maybe meter tall pony.
Hope you haven't giving up on "sentinel of the sun"
I do enjoy that
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I have NOT given up on that and plan for much more funny XD just... Ideas on how to GET to those points are having a hard time flowing.