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BRITICAL-HIT


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  • 157 weeks
    monthy update (I guess)

    alright, in an active effort to remember to use this site and keep ya'll in the loop about things, I've come to the decision to start doing monthly summaries of my work, my outside fimfiction stuff, and the story updates you guys are probably after. As such, sorry peeps who have project horizon tagged and weren't expecting messages.

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  • 161 weeks
    coming soon...

    ... 2 years, 2 months and 5 days.
    I don't even want to try and caluclate how many days that is in total, but that was my last update on Project horizon.
    This whole time, I've been saying I would work on it when I get a chance... or on random occasions where I'd look at the site and see how my followed stories update. In reality, I don't always follow through on these statements.

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  • 206 weeks
    ... why hello there.

    Forgot about me by chance? I haven't uploaded in a while so it's understandable, and for that I appologise. However, I've recently rekindled some inkling of what made me enjoy writing on here to begin with due to working recently with "Rewind Rumble and Cartoon Fight Club."

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  • 230 weeks
    time flies.

    ... Well, I've been a bit quiet, haven't I?
    yep, Imma try get back to get back to things. sorry for taking a while, but college felt like screwing me over with a small mountain of work to do.
    project horizon will be soon, keep an eye out.

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  • 247 weeks
    development update, blah blah blah...

    Hey guys, my again. Been a bit quiet on my side lately, but I hope to change that soon.
    To start with, the next chapter of project horizon is proving to be a tough egg to crack. I'm stuck on a particular segment, so I'll continue to work on my own terms until I'm able to advance beyond it.

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Oct
11th
2017

My next steps, finding a better route · 6:44am Oct 11th, 2017

Hey guys, just figured I'd let you know what's going on.
So, fixing the balance, let's talk. It's gone great, I'm slowly getting somewhere with the story, and I've enjoyed every moment of writing it.
However, things have been a bit.. Slow, to say the least. I'm still struggling to get to a point where I feel I can move forward with a chapter, and can't seem to get my interactions between characters done right, especially seeing as they've now split into two groups in the story.
Being honest though, this is also my fault. If you go back and look at the stories first few chapters (and some of the newer ones), you can see a clear lack of detail and characterisation. While this could show my improvements while Doing this story, it makes the story feel bad compared to most others, and is likely why there are so many dislikes on my story.
Not all hope is gone however, as I felt something while going back and remastering chapter one. I felt as though there was finally something I could do to fix this, and improve the story in general. Any issues with previous chapters, any problems with my characters interactions all could be fixed.
So, while I'm not gonna stop with my efforts to get more chapters out, I will be placing a greater priority on my remastering process. I feel like if I can make the older chapters better, I will be able to attract a larger audience who enjoys the story, and begin to gain a better understanding of my characters myself. Maybe then you guys might comment on the story.
Anyway, gotta get ready for another day at college (the OTHER reason chapters are taking so long) and prepare for my job interview tomorrow (another reason. You know, I'm starting to think these delays are coming from my own stupidity or something).

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