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BRITICAL-HIT


I AM REBORN!!!

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Theo had a rough childhood, always moving around the country caused him to be alone and unable to make friends who he would inevitably lose. A fresh start is the last thing he needs. Yet, alongside two idiots he barely knows, he is transported to another world, and transformed into what can only be described as an animated horse.
He seems reluctant to leave, despite otherworldly threats constantly trying to kill him and his threats. However, he soon learns that the world he came from and the one he is in were once connected, and that his past makes less sense than he first thought..

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 18 )

"Don't worry about Mr. Branwen." Ivan said, pointing at the teacher, who was taking a drink from a flask, most likely alcohol. "He's probably just gonna forget about it after class."

Mr. Branwen, who ha a flask? Is this a reference to Qrow from RWBY?

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Yeah, Qrow was one of the inspirations for Mr Branwen, although I doubt Qrow knows much about science.

THIS STORY IS NOW MY FAVOURITE BECAUSE THE MAIN CHARACTER HAS MY MY REAL NAME also doctor who photo

Glad you like the story mate, the next chapter should be out by the end of the month, or a remastering of chapter 2, whichever ones done first.

Dude. What the fuck. Where in the hell did you find the goose ass you pulled this out of? I want the next golden egg it lays.

“Follow the yellow brick road!
Follow the yellow brick road!
Follow the-
follow the-
follow the-
follow the-
follow the yellow brick road!”
Lol, I should stop reading fanfics tonight, I’m getting delirious.
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"We were walking on some yellow path until we were attacked by some wooden wolf thing, lost track of where we were and ended up here." Theo and Made nodded in agreement, while a look of shock and awe filled the face of the young pony.

Holy fuck it was actually yellow!! Lol!! God i need to put this down.
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"She was beautiful, magical even. She had this glow to her that my dad can see in me, even in the midst of puberty. She had this way to make anyone open up about almost anything. She, ahem, shined like the sun." This last bit the group sniggered at." I always wanted to meet her, even once. I wanted to see how alike we were." The group was silent until Ivan spoke out.

Lol, his mom is celestia

Lol, flutters as a psychologist, how did I never think of that?

"He will know soon, Celestia." She thought. "I will tell him when the time is right."

Oh dear lord, you actually went with celestia being his mom?

Recap while I wait for the next chapter. Ivan is celestia’s son(probably), and I basically just flutters and twi smushed together. Ivan is pinkie and Rainbow, which leaves aj and rarity for made. Hm... I sense an Appledash fan.

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Yeah, probably should've been more subtle.

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Yeah, I got a little bored towards the end, so I delved into dark-ish territory.

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Woah there, steady on! I don't ship everybody you know!
And don't you mean Theo is Celestia's son, not Ivan?
Besides, the only ones I ship are Theo X Starlight and Made X Ivan.

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Ah, my mistake, i put ‘Ivan’ instead of ‘theo.’

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