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CTVulpin


An aspiring Author honing his skills by writing about these silly little ponies. A Fox of few words outside the realm of fiction, unless he gets on a roll with something.

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  • 238 weeks
    Ash vs. The End of the End

    I feel the need to speak about how differently the key events of Season 9 would play out in the Order-naries 'verse, but at the same time I don't feel up to making a proper story out of it. I'm going to split the difference with this blog, outlining what would happen without giving too much detail.

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  • 239 weeks
    And the magic goes on...

    What a way to end the series. From a story-crafting standpoint, I have some complaints about how the final two-parter got rolling, and the resolution isn't how I'd have handled it.
    The overall execution, however, and especially the final final episode, were wonderful.

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  • 265 weeks
    Still can't help myself.

    I promised I'd focus on Pumahara after I finished Storm-chased, and I honestly have tried to get the next chapter done, but my silly, silly brain just can't leave the Order-naries 'verse slot on my WIP list empty for very long.

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  • 267 weeks
    Storm-chased complete and changed

    I put up the last chapter of Order-naries: Storm-chased a couple days ago. After looking at it, though, I found myself dissatisfied with the last couple paragraphs, so I've gone back and replaced them with a new, better-paced scene. One that I think works better for Ash and Rarity meeting the dust has mostly settled.

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  • 267 weeks
    Cyan's launched another kickstarter

    The geniuses who brought us Myst, and thus indirectly made Aitran possible, have announced their newest game project: Firmament.

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Oct
10th
2017

My Reaction to the My Little Pony Movie · 12:08pm Oct 10th, 2017

I have this quirk I sometimes refer to as "mind infection." It's when a story impresses and inspires me so much that I can't rest or focus on other tasks for a while due to my brain crafting a fan fiction or original story based on what I just read or saw. In the average case, I only have to run a scene or two in my head to stave the mind infection off. The better the story that kicks off a mind infection, though, the harder it is to shake.
I saw the MLP movie last night, and I got maybe three hours of sleep before I woke up due my brain working in overdrive on a fan-fic of the Order-naries arriving in Canterlot just a bit too late to be involved in the inciting incidents and instead have a side adventure being chased by the Storm King to the Crystal Empire and back after managing to make off with the petrified Cadance.
And, in this concept, Ash gets his horn broken early on, because why not have one of my OCs become a foil for Tempest even though she wouldn't be in the story until the climax, if at all? (and also Ash attracts an absurd majority of the slapstick/physical pain I deal out to my characters)

Granted, this "mind infection" thing is an extremely subjective way to judge a work, and I'm sure the reason the Movie had such an impact on me is likely due to how much I've come to rely on Friendship is Magic for creative inspiration since I was introduced to the show. Still, I enjoyed the movie tremendously. It's not perfect; there are a few small plot holes, missed opportunities, and "fridge logic" questions I could make, but overall it's got everything that's great about the show and a little more.

I may actually write this fan-fic idea once I've finished Trials of a Changeling Queen. The current concept requires that chapter of Cabbage Patch's life be complete, at least.

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