My Own Versions · 11:46am Aug 4th, 2017
Have you ever read a story that you thought was going to be exactly what you are looking for, but instead it is just disappointing?
Yeah that has happened with several stories over the past few weeks. They are start off strong but then devolve into something meh. Many of them like Cubby Cheek, and Spike the Horny Dragoness have been like this.
The first promises a focus on ass fetish to start with but then turns into a mostly tickle and foot fetish by the end of it.
Spike the Horny Dragoness didn't have much build up and the final extra chapter which....it really could have done without, and devolved quickly into sex with no build or even making it look like she would even attempt her goal anymore.
These stories have good idea's to start but they turned into something meh or I may make my own version of both to give what was truly expected, or what I would have preferred or more of a story with a better ending.
No hate to the original writer or anything, people enjoyed them I just wasn't one and was hoping for something slightly more or what the title promised.
After I finished Doggy Style and do some rewrites on the Rise of Spike the Dragon, new more stories will come out. And these aren't stolen idea's cause even the concepts have been done many times. Just my time to put a spin on it.
welcome to my entire life...
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The struggle is real.
you are what ever man aspires to be. being able to read porn, go "meh" and make better porn to spite it
(just a use of words, i don't mean you actually wish to spite the stories)
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I just think both had more potential that wasn't used properly.
The Chubby Cheeks one really got me because from the description and the first chapter, and the title it had very little to do with Spike's ass, and with my almost addiction to ass it hurt.
Yes especially when you put the time into reading the story.
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Yeah it is a real let down. Which is why I plan on just doing some major alterations.