Winter's Love

So, it's been almost a year since I published my first clop fic, and despite it having a pretty high viewer count and decent score, it's sorely lacking in comments. I would really like to know more what people think about it; is it good, is it bad, or bland or boring? What makes it bad or good? I want actual opinions, something to help me evolve as a writer. I would be forever greatful if someone wanted to take a look at it and give me a comment or two.

And since Luna is the main pony of said story, how about some music focused on best pony?

Comments

[Steadfast Hoof]

I really enjoyed how blasé it was. That little interruption from their child made it grounded and the story is all the better for it. There are plenty of graphic Clopfics out there, but there are depressingly few "fleshy" ones like your fic.

[The Ranger]

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Thank you, I'm gad you enjoyed it