doing some editing · 1:46pm Oct 9th, 2012
I'm doing some editing on the chapters. I was told to do some more proofreading so thats what i'm doing. Anyway have a nice day.
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I'm doing some editing on the chapters. I was told to do some more proofreading so thats what i'm doing. Anyway have a nice day.
I used a proofreading program on the first chaptert and it's that one that needs the most editing![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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sadron was right it needs to be edited heavily