Editting! Yay! · 12:08am Jul 24th, 2017
So, Gilda 3 is with a very nice editor at the moment, and should be out soon. In the meanwhile, here's a sneak peak of the unedited tripe (and why editing is so freaking necessary)
She might not have the pure "push" power and resistance, pound per pound, that a hyper pony like her opponent/to-be-lover had. She had what she considered much better-- the Flyer's gift to all his children was a combination of preternatural reflexes, senses, speed, strength, stamina, and above all focus. No magic, she thought with smug satisfaction. Not my blazefighting, not my prayers, but no weatherwinging and whatever Flutters has given him, either. Just what our mommas gave us and daddies dealt us.
And it was just that extra set of magic, really, that gave ponies their edge in war, right? Of course, she reassured herself.
Bulk Bicep, a mere nine feet tall but with dangerously broad shoulders in proportion, with ridiculously ripped muscles and ridiculously small wings, was… not posing. That's kinda disapp… she began, and her train of thought rammed into a fallen log. A fallen log attached to his scorchfucked groin! Maybe we shoulda let him wear a cup-- that damn thing looks like it'd hurt as much as a club if he whacked away with it!
I can only be ashamed.
Just curious what is huntingverse and where can I learn more 'bout it?
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It's the Hyperverse, at least how I reference it, and it's basically where all of my fics except for Craved Bird are set. I sometimes overinclude worldbuilding, so there's a lot all over the place, and I've also replied to comments on Hunting Season as well as held a few (now closed) Q&A sessions. I'll generally answer most questions, with the caveat that what I say is "what I'm thinking right now and might change later" until it goes into print. Basically, it's an anthro Equestria where about a quarter of the population is up to 9' tall with overdeveloped sexual characteristics and are both easy gainers, muscle-wise, and have comic book/anime levels of strength. Most of the first five seasons' events happened more or less intact; a lot of S6, and I'm on the edge about S7 so far. Somewhere in late S4, the other members of the Mane Cast began to ascend to alicorns as well-- for example, AJ during the Coloratura ep. That one got weird here. Other little blips here and there, since it's a much more action-based... and much, much more porny... 'verse.
Thanks for the background, things a lot more sense.
Even though you already have one I would like to extend an offer to proofread and edit your stories for free. I'm loving your story, but I would love it even more knowing that I helped it come along.
If you're interested you can private message me at your earliest convenience.
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What's your tolerance for wordcount to look at?
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I could do about 10,000 words a chapter, but it could go up.
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Gotcha. I'll shuffle through some things tomorrow and ping one at you. Thank you very much!
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Shoot looking forward to it.