I'm Learning (Hopefully) · 12:38am Jul 22nd, 2017
I hope I've been improving as I move along with the story. Ive been doing a lot of reading as well and forming my own style of writing but its slow going. I was looking at the stats of the story and saw that there was a steady decline of views per chapter. The largest of them being after the prologue so I read over the Prologue and cringed. A prologue should grab the readers attention and tell them where the story is going. After the description its the first thing a reader sees and can drastically affect their view of the story. Like if they will continue or not. I almost wish I started writing with another story so I got practice for this one but I'm sure all ideas are like a child you care for. What I'm getting at is I may try and improve the prologue. The content will stay the same but hopefully it will flow better. The rest of the chapters may get a makeover eventually but I'm worried about the fate of my story.
Than you to all you loyals that have put up with me this long. I look forward to continue writing for y'all.
~Cheers!
Prologue had a once over. Hope its better...if someone would be so kind and read over it to see I would greatly appreciate it.