More edits... · 1:23pm Jul 18th, 2017
Chapter 6 of Pearl's Travels: Canterlot has had some edits to add to the story's exposition.
It's especially noticeable in the last part, and I do hope it reads better now.
I'm listening to feedback I receive, but I don't always receive it on FIMFiction. Please do keep sending your constructive criticism my way, though.