Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. Rewrites. · 9:40am Jul 17th, 2017
The rewrites. So many rewrites...
I swear, this chapter, this blasted chapter. This chapter is the reason it's taken so long for me to update Equestria Strains. First time I wanted Eureka hanging out with the Daycare gang. Didn't like it. Then I wanted mobsters to come in. That's right, mobsters. Tanya would track Gilda to the daycare and bring mobsters for her because Gilda owes them a lot of money. Flipping mobsters. But I thought their introduction wasn't good enough, so I rewrote the mobsters. But then I realized the mobster subplot is just going to drag the story along. I already spent my fluff chapters on the Eureka kidnapping, we need to get the story going.
Then I rewrote the entire chapter into something different. Budge would fight Gilda over a sandwich. Remember Budge? Problem is the fight felt forced, and I wrote a middle man between Eureka and Gilda.
But no more. We're good. I cut the middle man. No fight. No mobsters. Some bullshit, but not intrusive bullshit and it's plot relevant bullshit. We're good. It's getting published, after a basic edit. Speaking of which, I may need an editor for grammar and crap.
It'll get published... Crap, I'm traveling. It'll pop up by the end of the month. Your patience will be rewarded, children! WE're going to start seeing some real shit in the upcoming chapters. Figurative real shit, not literal real. I'll rip monster testicles off but not do poop jokes. I got standards.
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