It Begins

The opening chapter of my Red Hood project has been auto-approved and submitted. Hope you enjoy!

Comments

[Scootareader]

You are refining the maturity level of your stories. I am quite happy about that.

Noted: No references to songs in the story description. Definitely a positive.

Noted: While it is a crossover, a cursory look does not appear to indicate a Displaced fic. Definitely a positive.

Noted: While it is indicated in the description that the Red Hood is a stallion in this, the cover art is still of a human Red Hood. Potentially confusing. Would recommend more fitting cover art moving forward, though it is admittedly somewhat expensive to commission cover art from a good artist. Not necessarily a negative, but not a positive either.

Noted: This follows a very typical formula with you. Not that it's bad that we've come to expect a certain type of content from you, but it is dragging on a bit much at this point. Recommend trying, dare I say it, something non-crossover? It seems difficult enough even continuing some of these stories past a chapter or two, but you seem to have some good writing talent. I recommend possibly trying a one-shot of a different genre. If it's not something you're familiar with, perhaps a collab. Dark/sad is the type of story I enjoy writing most.

All in all, I say this one is a plus! I want to see a wider variety of inspiration from you, though.

[The Phantom Joker]

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Well, about the stallion thing... not EVERYPONY knows what a human is, do they? Therefore it is only logical that they think Red Hood is a stallion, not a human.

[Scootareader]

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If he's bipedal, I don't think any word would come to mind as to how to describe him. If they heard his voice, perhaps they'd consider him a stallion due to how he sounded. Interesting.

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