I changed it! · 10:50pm May 23rd, 2017
So I got the first chapter finished. I rewrote and I'd like to know what you all think. Please thank Makazi for giving me the idea for the rewritten version. if you want I can post the original so you can remember it.
I'd also like to say that after asking around what the name would be for one of my characters I final found one that I think was the best. Everyone please congratulate 42Herooftime for giving the name Viridian Comic.
Please read my rewritten chapter of Becoming Whole.