Needs some help!!! :3

Hello all! As you can tell my grammar well....sucks. Like really badly. In fact while you are reading this you are going to possibly find alot of mistakes. So I would like to know if anyone is interested in helping along in the story? I would like to have some proofreaders evaluate and analyze my work before submission ^_^

Comments

[CyberCommand]

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yes im intrested

[GodDragonDevil]

399686

Haha wtf is up with that gif....It hilarious and thank you lol.

[Lanafilly]

I would LOVE to help you.... if i wasn't so horrible at proof-reading XD

when it comes to pre-reading i'm more of a flow-editor if you will, i make sure things seem to be going smoothly, make sense and and isnt going to fast or to slow, I also point out plot-holes (make sexual innuendo joke and i shall smack thee) in the stories, so if you need someone to do that for you i'm willing to help you out, but if not then nevermind

on another note i'm enjoying the story quite nicely

EDIT:...what the hay is up with that gif???? i love it!!!!!!

[GodDragonDevil]

399701

That sounds awesome I would really appreciate any help you guys can offer. If possible I wonder if I can make a group on here, add you guys to it, and then I can privately send you guys what I write ^_^

[Lanafilly]

399703 well you can just put it on Google Documents and then just send all of us a PM for us to look it over

[OwlTrowl]

I'd being willing to help proofread. Not sure how much that will actually help but meh, I'll try.
Yeoman, out

[Avatar of Shadow]

I tend to be a grammar nazi at times, so I would be glad to help!

[distortedtruth92]

i can help with grammar and a little on the flow man

[GodDragonDevil]

Hey I just finished the next chapter but I need a Proof reader. Anyone on right now? I am planning on submitting either tomorrow or saturday