Oct
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2012
What are you thinking? · 6:43pm Oct 13th, 2012
Ok sorry for the long break *I try and post new updates as fast as possible* but I currently am just wondering how you, the reader, think about my story so far.
In all honesty, I really would like to have your input. What would you like me to add into my story? Do you want some comedy, action, sadness, etc...
I want to know what you guys want out of my story and to tell me truthfully how you feel about the progression of the story as well.
Also, FTI, I read every single comment made on my story, so your post are not being ignored ^_^
I will begin to work on the next chapter tomorrow and will hopefully post it on Monday or Tuesday :3
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I THINK YOU ARE DOING FUCKING EPIC!
Though I would like to know, how did hulk use world breaker? Like when did be first use it and how? Also, I think more action and sadness, yoir doig so fucking great capturing the feels of my Childhood hero!! KEEP GOING BRO!!
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Well to not make things too complicated, I am using the Hulk from Post World War Hulk comics, which means he is like suppressing 99% of his power most of the time. If you know what World Breaker Hulk is, its when the Hulk literally gets so mad and emits so much energy/power that he is able to destroy an entire planet with ease.
Also thank you for the compliment, I hope to improve and get better over time to better entertain you
I always have one approach with the stories I read: this is the vision of the author, how he/she envisions the world. Because of that, i really enjoy the stories where the author keeps things done his/her way, because is his/her vision of the events. Different authors would tell the same history in a different way, and this is why is almost never boring to read some similar ploted fics.
What i am trying (and failing) to say is: This is your story, keep doing what you are doing, because it was how you earned the views, favs and the spot in the feature box.
Personally, i love to see comedy fics, but this story works efficiently without the laughs. Also, The Hulk doesn't look like a character who offers open chances for comedy.
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Thanks, I completely understand and appreciate all of the kindness that you have put into making that comment. I will am always though looking forward to what the fans think and love any criticism and such any of you can offer me. This is my first fan-fiction so I am still very nervous and new to this but I promise you I will try my best to entertain you
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lol I am honored that you comment on this blog. Honestly, you are one of the few people that I really respect on here and look forward too very much to see what you say next. I can try and add some more action and comedy, but not that much sadness I guess? Should I change the story tags then? Im not that good with comedy but I will try. Also, what thing with Celestia are you talking about?
420337GASP!! Do you know where I can read the series online
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Here is just alittle example of his power in the current comics.
If you want to really see what he is capable of try going to Comicvine.com
420377HOLY FICKING SHIT!!!!!!! HULK IS TRUELY THE MOTHERFUCKKNG STRONGEST THERE IS!!!!!! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go read the series
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Haha I am glad you like it ^_^ Honestly I think its awesome that the Hulk is so much more smarter and stronger now then in the past.
Hope you enjoy the awesome read!
I love the story and the hulk is always awesome truly I cant wait for more
You want the truth?, ok...
+ gamma radiation from hulk, have fun 
YOU ARE A GOD!
Please continue, and I hope to see the residents of ponyville reaction to the transformation of HULK!
Hey here's an idea
I'm not too sure you even need guidance with this story; it's been doing fine so far under your direction. Only thing I can think of to say is to make sure you have more than just mindless fighting all the time. IDK
. Great job so far, can't wait for the next chapter. 
Yeoman, out
Your doing absolutely amazing man.
Well you basically already know what I'm thinking! Story is good. I'm look forward for more of it, and remember to poke me when you are not sure with some ideas and stuff I try to help on face a little ;)
Tags? Screw them, even if there is "Sad" tag it's not mean that you are forced to keep us crying whole time. And I'm pretty sure that Hulk can give many ocasions to laugh too, especially as Hulk himself. Banner too.... let him try to undesand Pinkie. Hulk is going to ignore it and just live with the fact that Pinkie is Pinkie ;] Not to mention stuff with clothes and fact that little Banner can change into...how big is Hulk?... well, into something aroud 3 meter height,green and stuff.
Someone said...Hulk vs Celestia? Nope... only if something is going to go reaaaallly bad. And this could be Celestia false and she is not so stupid to attack someone else because of species especially when she is going to hear that Banner/Hulk already saved many lifes. Well, they changed a little topography of the forrest but who cares?
I think that the only thing that I could criticize about this is the format. Simply having the Hulk's words be green kinda bugs me, for example. When someone is talking, you use "quotation marks" and when they're thinking, you use "quotation marks and italicize."
Then there's your introduction of characters. I know you want everyone to know that it's Twilight Sparkle you're talking about, and that she's super intelligent and amazing with magic, but you can't just throw that out there. If it doesn't have anything to do with what's currently happening, don't mention it. If Rarity is sewing something for her little sister, I don't care about the fact that she's been to Appleloosa. I care about the fact that she's been sewing since she was a filly, and has great talent with it. Don't rush in details that don't pertain to the current situation, even if they're key to who the character is. If it's that important, it will come up on its own.
Other than that, I've got nothing at the moment. Fantastic thing you're doing, and I look forward to seeing more.
I know I am late to the party, but I just have to say that I am absolutely loving this story. I am tracking dozens of stories at the moment, and they are all great. However, when I wake up, I am searching for an update to this Hulk story.
As for what I want....I want Hulk scenes! I am excited to see the reactions of the Mane 6. However, I am hoping not to get what I want too quickly. Sometimes, stories are better when the reader doesn't get what he/she wants too right away. Delayed gratification is the usually the best gratification. However, write your story in whatever way you wish to write it. You obviously have the talent to do it right.