First few days and loving it!

I've got SO much really good feedback from all of you, and it has been Awesome <3
I am learning a lot and really enjoying the process of figuring out what it is I am doing wrong, and working to fix my mistakes. Please, don't hold back on my part, and continue with your feedback! I'll only get better at compiling this story, and that means a better story all round.

Also, this happened.

I don't know what went wrong, but wow. I guess that means I gotta step up my game. And thank you all for taking the time and effort to make your way through my typos and blundering. I promise that as I get better at this, I'll do my utmost to create something worth reading and hopefully something that you all can enjoy :)