I'm feeling a bit better + sneak peek. · 7:01pm Oct 1st, 2012
Hey everyone, I just wanted to say that I really appreciate all your support and I'm feeling better. I guess it was just the shock of hearing that my grandfather has cancer, but I know that there are things in life we can't change. I also decided to start writing again and I'm currently busy with yet another new story.
The title of the new story: Doctor Whooves and Twilight Sparkle discover the history and future of Humans.
Pretty self explanatory, eh? Note that the history won't be accurate, it will be my own imagination. There will be some accurate things about history in it, but it won't be a history lesson either. The same with the future. I don't have a crystal ball that tells me the future, so it will also be my imagination. That way I can teach you guys a few things about history, but it will still be an amusing story. The doctor is going to be Doctor nr 9 Christopher Eccleston. Mainly because I’m still busy watching season 1. I might change him in the later chapters when I’ve seen more seasons.
Sneak peak:
The Doctor cursed. The original plan was that the TARDIS would go from the home planet of the Krogans back to Earth. That was until his TARDIS decided to give up and just stop in the middle of its journey. Yes, the TARDIS had seen better days when it was young, but the Doctor always kept it in a good state so that these things didn’t happen.
The Doctor looked at his monitor to see where he had landed, but it didn’t want to power up. “Bollocks, now I have to look at the electrical circuit and at the engine. It just isn’t my day today. First these Krogans want to skin me alive, because apparently I’m not strong enough and now the TARDIS decided to stop in mid-flight.” His hand went through his, almost non-existing, hair and he sighed. “Well, better get to work then.” If there was one thing that Doctor really hated then it was doing maintenance to his TARDIS.
The doctor got on his knees and opened the little fuse box, maybe one of the fuses jumped off. He sighed again, all the fuses were okay so that meant that the problem had to lie with the wiring. He closed the fuse box again and got up. While he was walking towards a piece of the wiring he heard a knock on the doors of the TARDIS.
“Dear God, you’re telling me that the place where the TARDIS landed is inhabited? It really isn’t my day today. I like meeting new species, but this is just a really bad time.” He made his way to the door and sighed before opening the door. He expected to see a face, but nothing was there. His gaze drifted downwards and he locked eyes with a white pony with a blue mane and she had a police uniform on. “Yes, can I help you?”
Tell me what you think and if something needes to be changed. For me it's missing something. Something, but I can't place my finger on it.
Here:
The new doctor is the funniest doctor
395691 Don't know, still busy with the first season.
395701 um first series or season I don't know how the doctor who's work
395705 the 2005 one. this one: badwilf.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/Christopher-Eccleston1.jpg
395711 ah he was good
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He's better
395726 its true
395834 see he agrees 395711
395847 Yes, but I can't change the Doctor because I don't know anything about the Doctor you two find so good. Maybe when I watch his seasons I'll change him, but until then it's gonna be doctor nr.9.
395850 why don't you watch his season instead of that one
395864 I go chronological.
Ok then I give up
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I may have lost the battle
But I will NOT lose the war
397168 We will meet again... ON THE BATTLEFIELD!!!!
397171 You shall die in my hands as I choke the life from your pathetic body
397174funnydictionary.com/img/entry_images/171/W6lOnScQH96.jpg I'm a God, you can't harm me.
397179 no god is truly invinsable