Feb
2nd
2017
Royal Blood Line Reedited! · 1:25am Feb 2nd, 2017
So I know a lot of people have been telling me that there were more mistakes than usual in my more recent story
. While I kind of know this, given I was rather limited for editors given the nature of the story LegionofPony, very kindly offered to take a look at it for me. So for anyone who is interested it taking another look you may find the story is a lot better than before!
Thanks, everyone!
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well with the start you have here it would be nice to see how you run with this idea.... mature or not this is an very good start.... wouldn't mind being an editor if you will continue with this
4406450 I have two other who offered to edit for me in the future too, but I'll keep your offer in mind. More pairs of eyes to spot errors are better than just one after all. Thanks!