Update 3: UGH! · 6:19am Jan 27th, 2017
I wanted to give a quick update as to why the next chapter has already taken twice as long as the last one. There are two reasons, university and writer's block. The first one I'm completely ok with, but the second one is frustrating. I'm theoretically almost done with the next chapter, titled "Such a Lucky Girl," and I hope to have it up this weekend.
Take your time, no need to rush yourself. I can understand how it is,Currntly writing a story where a colt gets himself fecked gay. We are here if you need ideas or just want to bounce stuff off us.
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I really appreciate that. I guess I'm just a little frustrated because I had a whole schedule mapped out, and I barely made it halfway through the story before falling behind.
On a side note, do you mind me asking which colt?
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As the project strands now, the colt is an unnamed earthpony OC referred to as "little brother"
I may change it in the future
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I actually like the idea of him remaining unnamed personally.
Also, if you don't mind me asking, what kind of ending are you personally hoping for out of the ending of my story? I have a plan in mind, but I still like to see what people want.
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Ending I am hoping to see is The CMC ends up getting knocked up, as each of their freewills are slowly snuffed out as the become depraved cock sleeves. Possable the mane six come to save them only to find there nothing left to save. Even if they get them not to be two bit sluts, the CMC would be empty shells of ponies. Sweetie would be the first to break, while applebloom would take a bit longer because of her stubbornness. Scootaloo would be hardest to brake because her faith in Rainbow dash and her tomboyishness. Odds she would need to see RD broke or saying she isn't worth saving...or a pony she is led to be Rainbow.