Jan
20th
2017
You guys are awefully quiet. . . · 6:49am Jan 20th, 2017
At the risk of sounding like an attention seeking narcissist, I have noticed a profound lack of feedback regarding my rebooted story, Disharmonious Synchronization, in spite of my attempts to encourage it in the authors notes, and I am starting to remember why I revoked the old one in the first place.
I won't know if I'm doing something wrong if nobody tells me.
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Allow me to say that differently. I am doing the best I can, but with appropriate feedback I can improve on the quality of my writing. Please note that I am not ordering you to provide feedback, it's just that the silence is rather disconcerting considering I went to the effort of bringing it back.
To be honest I haven't watched Steven Universe yet, which means that this is a spoiler fic for me. So even if I do eventually read it, it won't be anytime soon, sorry.
Personally I think it's rather good for a crossover. Here's hoping during all this, Twilight finds a certain journal of Sombra's.
All I can really say is I think that you are doing a really good job with the story so far. You are keeping all the characters in character, especially with pre-character development Peridot.
I think that the lack of feedback might have to do with people who have already read the story before it was taken down before came back to the story just their like and favorite and just didn't have anything new to say.
Honestly ive been Worrying about IRL stuff...
sorry about that...
got this on my read later list sorry
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That's alright. I understand that everyone has other things in life to look forward to other than whatever I write.
4389111 I do have a few surprises planned out.
4389114 Thanks. I really am trying to keep everyone from being too OOC, so it's good to know I am at least doing well on that. I think you are right about the lack of feedback too, so I guess I should have expected that.
4389143 No problem.
Good story *bites sandwich while staring at wall* :3
Have it on read later. I do like stories with the Crystal Gems though, so I hope It meets my expectations. I hope for the best but expect the worst like in life.
Honestly, I didn't notice it's existence, I'm about to go read it.
4389689 Hope you like it. Be sure to tell me what you think of it.
4389696 it's really good so far, I've read the first two chapters and I already really like it, anyone reading this should go read it
Sorry just not a lot of chapters in it yet. So I'm hesitant on taking the investment on it. I was just looking at all the great stories I've started but will never finish, because they were cancelled or abandoned. God this night sucks
doesn't help that it looks like a Steven Univers crossover and I know nothing about the series. I loved Hallow Shades, so will try it. Once it's eather has more chapters or finished. Sorry I couldn't be of much help
4420218 That's alright, I understand completely. There are a lot of stories, not just on this site, that I would like to start reading but haven't updated in ages.