Jan
8th
2017
I need help... · 4:37am Jan 8th, 2017
Okay guys, I'm in desperate need of some ideas for my story "The Butterfly Pegasus". PLEASE READ ENTIRE POST IT'S IMPORTANT!
It's about Tirek's plan, I can't help but feel that it's a little confusing. First he's after Discord's magic, kidnaps flutter shy, turns her into a butterfly, then forgets about his original plan decides to make Fluttershy his queen for no reason at all.
I have know idea how I'm going to fix this. I screwed up big time and I may have to rewrite the entire story and start fresh. So it may get deleted, But I will bring it back if I can get some idea's to what I can write next. If anyone has any ideas for future chapters, please put those down in the comment section.
Thank you all for the support, it means a lot.
Well, i wouldn't have to say you need to redo the WHOLE thing. Just have him take that large portion of Discord's magic, like he did before. Then have him decide to punish Discord in a far more severe way: by making Fluttershy his bride, and the means of taking Equestria as a hostage, as well. But as a willing one, since he'd supposedly make her rule by his side. But if anything, it's more to ensure his role is secured as a ruler. After all: Nopony would dare try to usurp him while he has an element of harmony as his own. But as i said: she's still a means to an end. Hence why, like Rothbart, he'd have no qualms about killing her through the wrong vow. This probably just seems like what you've already done, but it's the best i could think of to help out. I hope it actually does help in some way.:)
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THANKYOU! YOUR A LIFE SAVER! This is exactly what I need thank you so much!!!
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Oh! Well, um.....you're welcome! Heh, Glad i was able to help you out, then.
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Mate, I'm not even kidding. I was sooooo worried that I was going to have to delete the story all together. So don't look so surprised at my reaction
4375317 Sorry. I just haven't seen that much enthusiasm in a long time. But it's good, because it means i helped out. And that's all that's important here.