Work continues on.

I should be on schedule to drop chapter 03 next weekend, having finished most of the fundamental rewrites from my previous draft. I've also further edited the flashback scene in the prologue, going into a bit more detail on what was happening in the Fall and smoothing things out a bit. It's quickly nearing the point where I'll actually be happy with it.

If anyone has particular comments or feelings about the changes, feel free to drop me a comment.