I am not too proud

I've seen other people catch flack for doing this before, so I'm going to make my policy clear. I'm publishing digitally, which means that I have the power to go back and change things in a chapter after I publish it. When I realize, either from someone pointing it out or on my own, that something I've written could be done better, I will rework it.

If those changes are significant, I'll do my best to keep people up to date if any of the facts have changed..

To that end, on the advise of OneLonelyPony, who has generously volunteered to help me out, I've reworked Chapter 00 a little. The flashback to the beginning of The Fall now comes first. While this changes the tone and flow of the prologue a lot, it doesn't really affect much else. If you're still with me after reading the old prologue, rereading it isn't really necessary to keep up.

If anyone else has any further suggestions to improve the story, I am also not too proud to accept their help.