Finally · 5:37pm Nov 30th, 2012
The long awaited chapter 04 is finally posted. I think I'm even mostly happy with all the parts of it.
Once every two months is kinda similar to twice a month, isn't it?
But seriously, between disappointment at my own work, writer's block, and illness, getting this together has been an uphill struggle. I'm glad I finally have something to show for it, and I hope you all enjoy it as much as the last chapter.
I put a lot of work this past while into improving the prologue as well, trying to fix all the places I rush ahead heedlessly. Twilight now has a much bigger part in the prologue, and a bit more is explained.
I still have bigger plans for this, but if I was unhappy about the way I went originally with about half of this chapter, the next chapter needs even more work to salvage something decent out of my drafts.
As always, let me know how you feel about the direction I'm going in, I'm always open to constructive criticism.
Oh, and special thanks to OneLonelyPony, Eustatian, and YetAnotherBrony for their assistance on 01, and to Shoggoth again for helping out with 04.
No foolish promises about 05, other than I'll do the best I can as quickly as I can.