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Pyrite


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  • 590 weeks
    Finally

    The long awaited chapter 04 is finally posted. I think I'm even mostly happy with all the parts of it.

    Once every two months is kinda similar to twice a month, isn't it?

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  • 595 weeks
    Commitments

    Well, it looks like I'm going to be letting people down. I'm going to need a little more time to even finish chapter 04, much less 05 which should have dropped this month according to my very optimistic "Two a month" schedule.

    Some of you might be wondering what happened, so I'll outline what's gone wrong with that.

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  • 599 weeks
    Delays

    03 is going to take another week, but should be arriving next weekend for sure. It took a lot more rewriting than I'd counted on, and I'm going to need the extra week to make sure I can go over it fully.

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  • 600 weeks
    Work continues on.

    I should be on schedule to drop chapter 03 next weekend, having finished most of the fundamental rewrites from my previous draft. I've also further edited the flashback scene in the prologue, going into a bit more detail on what was happening in the Fall and smoothing things out a bit. It's quickly nearing the point where I'll actually be happy with it.

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  • 601 weeks
    I am not too proud

    I've seen other people catch flack for doing this before, so I'm going to make my policy clear. I'm publishing digitally, which means that I have the power to go back and change things in a chapter after I publish it. When I realize, either from someone pointing it out or on my own, that something I've written could be done better, I will rework it.

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Nov
30th
2012

Finally · 5:37pm Nov 30th, 2012

The long awaited chapter 04 is finally posted. I think I'm even mostly happy with all the parts of it.

Once every two months is kinda similar to twice a month, isn't it?

But seriously, between disappointment at my own work, writer's block, and illness, getting this together has been an uphill struggle. I'm glad I finally have something to show for it, and I hope you all enjoy it as much as the last chapter.

I put a lot of work this past while into improving the prologue as well, trying to fix all the places I rush ahead heedlessly. Twilight now has a much bigger part in the prologue, and a bit more is explained.

I still have bigger plans for this, but if I was unhappy about the way I went originally with about half of this chapter, the next chapter needs even more work to salvage something decent out of my drafts.

As always, let me know how you feel about the direction I'm going in, I'm always open to constructive criticism.

Oh, and special thanks to OneLonelyPony, Eustatian, and YetAnotherBrony for their assistance on 01, and to Shoggoth again for helping out with 04.

No foolish promises about 05, other than I'll do the best I can as quickly as I can.

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