Re-doing.

I'm re-doing everything. Mostly everything. I'm not happy with the story as is. I've paid attention to the comments pointing out flaws in the story, and I'm gonna try to fix them.

Comments

[Sk1Tz]

Which story?

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4337312 The XCOM one.

[Sunny]

My advice? Finish this one as is and then write a new one with the lessons learned. As you do that you get a nice clear progression of your writing abilities and so on!

[Starcat5]

Wait... ANOTHER rewrite?!? I put off reading this fic until I was sure everything was set in stone (Barring another campaign bug), and now here I am with Ghost Hammer and Alien Hunters loaded onto my tablet, wondering if I should even bother when both have been stricken from the story.

...bah. Lets start fresh. *rage quits closes relevant tabs*

[badassgrunt]

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Last rewrite, I swear. Plus I want this story to be the best I can make it. The best. Better than my Halo one. The missions will be more detailed because I'm actually recording them.

[badassgrunt]

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I'm also posting the stuff already written down in Google Docs soon.

[badassgrunt]

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Done

It's one big chapter.