More re editing after current editing · 11:57pm Dec 7th, 2016
So a friend of mine looked at the story and, you're not going to believe it, there is still some work to be done. The key item he noticed, at its something that flew way over my head, was dialogue variation. So far (according to my friend), its: "...." x person noted, "....", y person said <- where's the variation? It doesn't feel like full, fleshed out story now that I think about it. So here's what's going to happen: I am going to finish my current editing process with the plan of attack I already have for it. Then, I will go back once more and work on the dialogue variation to make the story more readable and enjoyable.
I knew writing a story isn't all that easy, but Jesus, I'm getting my work cut out for me.
What about the new chapter? I haven't really touched upon it lately. It's done, but it's not DONE done. When I complete my current editing process, I'll go through the chapter a few more times, fix it up then post it. Then move on the the "variation" editing.
So to recap:
Finish current editing process
Post new chapter
Proceed with "variation" editing
So that's what's to come in the future guys. I'll be having my work cut out for me with this story. Take care y'all.
Don't forget to love eachother
'Till next time
-NickyD