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OnionPie


I'm nothing special, but I am trying.

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  • 322 weeks
    Royal Canterlot Library Feature and Interview

    So the noble curators of the Royal Canterlot Library decided they wanted to feature my story 'What is Left'. It comes with a written interview, too. Quite the honor. You can read my interview here: https://royalcanterlotlibrary.net/2018/03/09/onionpies-what-is-left/

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  • 373 weeks
    Working On Non-Pony Stuff Right Now

    Sorry for the lack of updates lately. I've been focusing on original writing projects so far this year. Writing is my greatest passion, and I want to make a career out of it. Sadly, you don't make any horsebucks from writing horsefics, so I'll have to look elsewhere for writing-related income. Not that I'm going to stop writing pony stuff forever; I have a nice home here on Fimfiction and this is

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  • 381 weeks
    Soon...

    8000 words. This weekend. Get hype.

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  • 395 weeks
    Call for Proofreaders!

    I have an 8,000 word fimfic that's pretty much finished. I'm in need of feedback on it before I make my last-pass revisions and edits. It's in its sixth draft at the moment. If you'd like to give it an early read and offer me your feedback, please do leave a comment here or PM me to let me know, especially if you're experienced with proofreading.

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  • 411 weeks
    Still Alive, Still Working: A Quick Update

    I'm currently working on two ~7k word stories. One is in its fourth draft, the other in its fifth draft. Both of them have been driving me nuts. I'm trying really hard to make them not suck. Sorry it's been taking so long to get out a new story for you guys. But hey, on the bright side, this time you may get two OnionPie stories at the same time. Hurray.

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12th
2016

Call for Proofreaders! · 2:22am Oct 12th, 2016

I have an 8,000 word fimfic that's pretty much finished. I'm in need of feedback on it before I make my last-pass revisions and edits. It's in its sixth draft at the moment. If you'd like to give it an early read and offer me your feedback, please do leave a comment here or PM me to let me know, especially if you're experienced with proofreading.

Thank you so much! Now I just have to get good cover art for it and it'll be ready for publication soon. Hurray.

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Comments ( 12 )

What's it about?

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Dehydrated Twilight in a desert, on a mission to make peace with an enemy nation, hallucinates her dead brother.

4252343

Not like.... Cream and sugar, is it? Cuz I can help with my mad skills

4252343 Well, that sounds like a happy, feel-good story.
I can also proofread, if needed.

It's Onion Pie, the queen of tragedy porn, what were you expecting? A fluffy story about kittens? :pinkiecrazy:

I'd offer but it looks like you're well-taken care of. :pinkiesmile:

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Thank you both. I've sent you the link to the story. The story is a bit sad, yeah, but there's a whole lot more to it than that. Hopefully your feedback will help make sure that it's as good as it can be.

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Yeah, I'm not exactly known for happy stories, am I? But hey, if you wanna help with proofreading, you're more than welcome to. There's no such thing as too many proofreaders.

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Depends on what sort of turnaround you are looking at, and what level of proof-reading you are looking for. I'm 1.5 months into a 6 month secondment in the head office in London, so I may not be able to offer really fast turn around. But I can't imagine I won't be able to find a few hours in, say, a week to ten days.

As for proof-reading, obviously if you only want tradition proof-reading - grammar and spelling, that cuts down considerably on the workload projection.

:: enter into contract negotiation mode :: :pinkiecrazy:

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A week to ten days may be a bit late; I hope to have the story published by then. You may just have to read it when everybody else does. I've already gotten a lot of great feedback on it, so I'm not desperate for more, though it's always appreciated. Cheers.

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Cheerio and best of luck!

Ack, this is Desert Thing, isn't it! I'm sorry man, I haven't been around the site much these last 2 weeks. You know I'm up for another look at it.

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It sure is Desert Thing. Hit me up on Skype sometime and you can give it that read.

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