Gilchrist's positioning in episodic chapters! · 3:09am Sep 28th, 2016
In most chapters that correlate to episodes, my standard procedure is to take the script and add some more reader-friendly formatting to it. What a very important reader has mentioned to me is that it feels like Gilchrist doesn't exist during the episode. While this is partially intentional, I would like to hear everyone's opinion.
In Chapter 7 (1/2), does it ever feel disconcerting that I never mention what Gilchrist is doing in relation to the rest of the world? I'm perfectly willing to go back and rewrite it, but more importantly, this will affect how I write the rest of the chapters that happen during episodes.
Please comment below or send me a PM. I check frequently and will reply to anyone who shares their thoughts.