Apologies Aren't Always Enough- Stories going to be taken a different direction! · 7:46am Sep 12th, 2016
Hey guys,
I've been giving this a long time thought. Basically, the original outline isn't going to be followed anymore but the chapters I had written out will be changed as well. So you will see what happens.
I am currently in the process of re writing chapter 5 for this story.
So in other terms, Sunset is going to live. <--- DO NOT REVEAL IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE STORY YET OR IF YOU DON'T LIKE SPOILERS ANYWAY.
But there will be chapters afterwards and it may become juicy!
The Chapter 5 PART- 1 will be deleted from the story page. The new CH 5 will take its place. I however, can keep that and part 2 on a google doc to read the alternative.
I've been having a better time with the rewriting of chapter 5 instead of splitting it into 2 parts and there were ideas that i wanted to play with and am not currently in the process of it. Well actually, majority of Chapter 5 that was written that lead up to the main climax will still be there. You'll notice some changes that I've done when you re read the chapter. With a new CH5 coming out, RE READ IT. I will put a [REWRITTEN] tag on it so that you guys know, "Hey, this chapter was re written".
Anyway, that's all I got for now!
-Shy
4206409 No where does it say you have to read it further than it already has.
I must be respectful for your opinion. However, it's my story and I feel this way. Sorry you can't find enough respect to be respectful of my decision. I deal with enough shit outside of fimfiction alone that I need to be able to complete this.
You, however, have not payed attention to what is to come AFTER CH 5 re write. I didn't describe anything. So, it may or may not effect this story as a whole in the long run.
-Shy.
This one has quite the saga doesn't it? I remember reading chapter 5... as the prologue, which then disappeared, and now reappeared, and now is going away again.
Well, I have no complaints, if you could keep the now alternative versions of the story up somewhere where it can be read. I quite like tragedy porn myself but obviously as author you mustn't let yourself be constrained in your own creative directions.
You could also keep them as alternative chapters right in the story itself, or in author's notes, or in blogs with links to the newly revamped chapters, the Fimfiction format is slightly friendly than gDocs, at least for mobile readers.
Anyway, now that you are changing the story's direction, would you mind sharing with us where it was originally going to go, perhaps in a later blog post after the story's run is done?