Operation Holey Luna is a go

So today I started and finished writing the new first chapter of the rewrite. I'm pretty happy with it right now which means I will hate it in three days. However, I think its a definite improvement from the original, largely because I'm taking the time to develop the characters instead of just jumping right into a fight scene.

With that said, it was shorter then I wanted it to be, but that is probably the result of my writing style then anything else. Thought as much as I want the story to reach novel length, I might just have to settle for something around a novella.

Anyways that is one chapter down, 13 more to go.

Comments

[Slavenger Karl]

Nice!