Jun
29th
2016
Reasons why I am cancelling · 7:45pm Jun 29th, 2016
So, I decided to cancel this story because I realized recently that I over complicated my plot and storyline as well as the races, so I'm going to be remaking... well everything I've done so far about it except for a few certain points and parts, oh and almost all of the events will remain. The new book will be titled similarly, but it is not going to have the whole MLP universe turned into humans, it's only going to be the actual ponies and the actual legendaries. Currently I am revising the plot and storyline to be better, so for those of you who have tracked my book and have read it to my last chapter feel free to give me constructive criticism and advice to make the re-write better.
ok i got three things to say to you. first of all don't call a fanfic a book it makes ya look pretentious mate. second you don't have to rewrite an entire story just because things are (apparently) complicated. third of all i didnt find anything complicated at all. you sure it's not all in your head?
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He's probably referring to the chapters he didn't release yet.
But honestly? I think it would have been perfectly fine the way it was.
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...The Races I kind of over worked on them so much that I went a bit over my head and I began struggling with writing the chapters, not only that but I realized I that I made Cobalion a bit... OP, which I originally was trying to avoid. Not only that but I did over complicated the whole plot. Reason; here.
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Thank you, and yes I also am referring to a few chapters I did not release because I could not find a way to finish them without making them gritty as hell.
Also to the everyone, I don't mean to be pretentious but I also don't want to get people down about just up and nowhere changing the whole story, I'm not making a whole new book, no I'm just currently cancelling it so I can rewrite the description, and fix up the whole story and not have Gijinka's (humanized creatures).
Well if you don't mind how about adding the other two in the story as well.
just one thing though instead of the far past how somewhere during, or before a session/episode it should be more simpler in my opinion.
4106694 Thank you, I'll keep that in mind then.
4107014 No problem I'm glad that I could help out in my own way.
I hope for the best for you.