So.... · 3:12am May 21st, 2016
That last chapter of Wrath of the Harbinger was really something, I guess. I'd like to think it spawned a lot more questions than it answered any amount of questions. You know, I kind of rushed it in the end to make sure that I made my deadline because I said that I was going to update it on the day that I said I was going to update it on (and got lazy on the second day and didn't work on it at all, go figure) so I forgot one thing that was supposed to make it in the chapter. Oh well, can't go back and change it now, because it'd make it an extra thousand words or so longer. Maybe two if I had to absolutely make it fit in, and I most likely would. Either way, the thing that was supposed to make it in was supposed to be an explanation about the Archon, to some extent. We don't know much about him at this point. Except that Alexander lives in his head as mentioned in chapter three. And Alexander is kind of a dick.
I think you'll notice that near the end is where you can really see where I was struggling to get the chapter out on the appointed date, especially since it hadn't been updated in months, so with the word choices it started moving a little bit too quickly for my tastes (despite being an 18k long chapter) and I think it suffered slightly. Not too much but slightly. Too late to go and change it now.
Either way. Let me know what you guys think below and whatnot!
BUT.... Despite all that, I think it still came out nicely. As I stated in the author's note in that chapter, it went through quite a bit of rewrites in the initial process. But you're not here to listen to me rambling about my writing process. I'd like to quote my earlier comment that I left on the story itself.
On another note! I like to think that this chapter spawned a lot more questions and than it did answers. To start in no particular order.
— Who are the meta-humans exactly? We know that they come from an alternate Earth and have advanced technology, and they're allied with the hunters, but that's it.
— These rules that the hunters are supposed to apparently follow; it's keeps coming up. What's up with that? Why were they established? How many rules are there? What are the rules exactly?
— What the hell was Maria's plan EXACTLY? We know she did... something, but we're not sure yet.
— Why the hell did the Archon send Alexander in the first place?
—The Archon has a daughter? Is she legal?
— What does C.D.E. stand for? Is it some kind of other organization? It obviously has some kind of influence if it sent in the titan and has dragons at its command.
It ends there but there's certainly more things that can be used as questions and whatnot. As I said before, let me know your thoughts and stuff.
Edit/s.
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Damn it. I forgot to mention something. Again. I think I am literally losing my mind. I'll have the thought and it's gone after two seconds and it takes me two minutes to find that thought again.
Just remembered! I'm working on a new story called Fluttershy the Trophy Wife and it should be done... some time. I'm not sure when. It's just I've kind of crashed really hard and I REALLY want to work on chapter six of WotH (I think the next chapter might be named The Forge/s of Conquest but it's still a working title) but it's also because I saw the season three finale of RWBY. God I'm so sad right now. But I'm forcing myself to work on the Fluttershy story and putting off chapter six for now.
