Revisions

I have done some revision to Charcoal. Please tell me what you think?

Comments

[iamli3]

i already read your post here last night that you made some revisions in it , with no responses , always a sad thing to see , i'll see if i ever feel like going over the fic or not though

but atm i just learned that yt has been shadow banning people on mass for years cause i just found a bunch of my comments that have been auto hidden from being viewed by anyone but myself , serious fucking bullshit problem here im not finding a solution to either , short of taking back youtube from google or just leaving it all together , but i don't have a following that could actually make an impact on that....

[youtube= https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NW-1s1UClX4]
https://productforums.google.com/forum/#!topic/youtube/4b5aUjTKQYo

[loopsorspool]

4105171
Yeah, ghost banning comments is always a bit spooky. Sounds like Big Brother to me.

[iamli3]

4105388 that was it's intent when google took over yt , but that's been the name of the game for a while and there's many players in this game of censoring and controlling the people....
http://www.breitbart.com/tech/2016/02/16/exclusive-twitter-shadowbanning-is-real-say-inside-sources/