I pity the man who has known no struggles, for it is only through hard times that we know who we truly are.
So chapter 3 of Friendly AC-130 Inbound, is almost done. I'm in need of a pre-reader or two to read it and tell me what they think. For anyone not interested this is me telling you I haven't forgotten about this story. It's alive!
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If your in need of a proofreader, editor or both just send me a pm. Aside from that keep up the great work.
You know what... I'm going to get off my fucking lazy ass and offer help... I regret it already. Alright first you need to change the title, to appeal to a larger audience. Secondly you need to go over why they don't immediately start shooting the changelings , rules of engagement type stuff. Then more throughout description of the plane itself. Minor details about the inside and stuff. And finally take out the characterization of the guys. Let their words describe them to the reader without you purposely jamming characters in. I'll be happy to help actually edit the story after I get my new gaming laptop in. Google docs is the best for group editing, but I'm fine with whatever!
Contact me if interested.
Have a fun time writing, never lose that or it becomes work.