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Azriel


I pity the man who has known no struggles, for it is only through hard times that we know who we truly are.

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  • 220 weeks
    The Unfettered Sun

    If you guys followed me take a look at my new story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390753/1/the-unfettered-sun/no-princess-rules-forever

    Tanks folks

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  • 240 weeks
    NPR Short Story

    I'm not quite sure why I wrote this short story, but eh, why not pass it along anyway? It's a bit on the macabre side of the house, might be because I've been reading Lovecraft and others recently. Though I'd say the scariest part about this thing is that it's unedited. But, just in case dark isn't your thing, no worries, and tanks for dropping in. For all others... enjoy. I guess?

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  • 256 weeks
    Quick Question For My Readers Of Friendly AC-130

    So, I've actually got a bit of a serious question to ask you all. I've got two separate paths this story can take, the first is the one that I've always planned for and it will be pretty long, the other is a little adventure which would be considerably shorter before wrapping up the loose ends. The first one is the one I really want to write, but I'm grappling a bit with the fact that it might

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    35 comments · 506 views
  • 262 weeks
    Next Chapter Update

    I'm finished with the first of a two part chapter that you can now expect will be up as soon as I have some people read through it.

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  • 283 weeks
    Bad Omen

    So Chapter 5 should be arriving after a few people pre-read and edit for me. Barring any major changes it should be up by next Friday at the latest, otherwise I'd say expect it Wednesday. If you want to pre-read it PM me.

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Apr
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2016

Chapter 3 · 12:11am Apr 5th, 2016

So chapter 3 of Friendly AC-130 Inbound, is almost done. I'm in need of a pre-reader or two to read it and tell me what they think. For anyone not interested this is me telling you I haven't forgotten about this story. It's alive!

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Comments ( 2 )

If your in need of a proofreader, editor or both just send me a pm. Aside from that keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

You know what... I'm going to get off my fucking lazy ass and offer help... I regret it already. Alright first you need to change the title, to appeal to a larger audience. Secondly you need to go over why they don't immediately start shooting the changelings , rules of engagement type stuff. Then more throughout description of the plane itself. Minor details about the inside and stuff. And finally take out the characterization of the guys. Let their words describe them to the reader without you purposely jamming characters in. I'll be happy to help actually edit the story after I get my new gaming laptop in. Google docs is the best for group editing, but I'm fine with whatever!

Contact me if interested.

Have a fun time writing, never lose that or it becomes work.

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