News · 4:32pm Mar 23rd, 2016
Hey guys, i HAVE OMETHING TO TELL YOU REGARDING ABOUT THIS STORY.
Despite I liked the old version I felt as if something was missing and when I reread it severl times I found that it was too...too lifeless, I mean I was just telling rather than showing; I mean I was just writing actions and writing feelings not what they were experiencing or how they felt. Kind hard to explain but I decided to rewrite this keeping the same concept and all, I had been self teaching me so I hink this is better and for your liking.
And also I would like to see your opinions there, they will really help regarding with my new writting that I have been learning
-Lufe out!.