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Gapeagle


Inspired to write when there's no time. Inspired to rest when there's time to write.

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  • 353 weeks
    Stormrider is Out!

    Finally, after all this time, I've gotten Stormrider where I wanted and have posted it. This is my final new story before I start going back to my older ones. I know this project has been heavily delayed, but no more! The Stormrider

    -Cheers for That!

    2 comments · 628 views
  • 367 weeks
    Small Update

    I am still around and I have been writing more. I just haven't released anything as of late. The main story I have been working on is The Stormrider. I have 7 chapters written and my plans extended to further chapters. Expect it soon. I'm trying to decide a good day to release it and Eagles, you may get an early look at it.
    That is all

    -Cheers for That!

    4 comments · 647 views
  • 371 weeks
    The Writing Rut

    So.....where to begin?

    Hello! My Eagles, yes you, you reading this blog, you may have noticed something about me.....well....you've noticed my severe lack of updates or writing in general.

    Read More

    3 comments · 677 views
  • 382 weeks
    Want a Hearth's Warming story?

    So, yes, I have thrown my entry into the rising pile of Christmas/Hearth's Warming fictions. This one is about Starlight with the help of Spike, getting Trixie a Hearth's Warming gift. It's the first time Starlight has ever done such a thing and she needs help.

    So will she get Trixie the best Hearth's Warming gift? Well, she may give something she didn't expect.

    Read More

    0 comments · 665 views
  • 383 weeks
    Newest Story: Applejack Western

    Like Red Dead Redemption?

    Like Johnny Cash?

    Like Applejack badassery?

    Like Apple Sisters bonding?

    Like them all in one?

    Then Gonna Cut You Down is the story for you!

    1 comments · 501 views
Feb
25th
2016

Underground...Underground... · 3:36am Feb 25th, 2016

So, I've started to try and see what I can do with A City's Understanding, one of my Tier 1 (Harmony's Creed, A City's Understanding, Under Loyalty's Flag, Equestria Girls: Racers) stories and I cancelled some time ago. To tell the truth, I started to really hate that story. I look at it now and I'm like "why?" However, I feel like my premise and idea was good, so I feel like it could be salvaged. I also feel like if I DO any non-fanfiction, it would be an original adaptation of A City's Understanding.

So, I'm going to try and see what my inspiration can lead me. Should I rewrite it? Should I just see where it goes? Or should I just let it stay stagnant and focus on the stories I SHOULD be writing?

(I don't think there's a song that capture's A City's Understanding like this one)

Comments ( 4 )

I love the premise of the story though it does at times feels like it went off track. Some characters introduced early on have not been seen again and the equality movement seems to have more traction than the Templar-Assassins war. Maybe what you could do, is go back a bit and start writing in another direction.

3776506 Well, if that's the only thing, I could alter what I have right now. I never planned for the Unionist/Equalist to have as much spotlight as the other factions. Once that little arc was done, I was planning to go right back to Templar stuff. So, I think I can actually work with that with the current story.

I would vote on holding off for now as you currently have Harmony's Creed: Brotherhood and Sons of Discord going. You also have Rainbow Dash's prequel Under Loyalty's Flag plus several other stories going on right now. I would recommend finishing one of your other stories first and then continuing on with this story. You still can put out chapters when your muse strikes but you have a lot on your plate right now.

do whatever you feel like is best

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