Poof · 11:04pm Feb 20th, 2016
Latest chapter was so annoyingly brain scratching that I edited it for a week. Finally uploaded something worthy, but had to cut half the stuff I wanted. Gonna go to bed now and hopefully wake up with a fresh mind to use those ideas I cut for the next chapter. Yay!
Well it was fun to read, however the part about being hungry and only getting coffee broke the flow of the story for me a bit.
3783564 Thank you for pointing that out! Gonna do a little bit of editing to add a meal scene.
3783900 yup, great going so far I look forward to a lot more chapters hopefully.