Another deleted scene from "Sweetie Belle's Small problem" · 6:45am Jan 21st, 2016
This was removed due to the fact that while I loved the idea of a secret all teenage pony club hidden right under the residents noises, it literally added nothing to the overall plot of the story and I doubt I would ever came back to this location in my fic again so in the end, I decided to remove it.
Almost at once, a large wooden door phased into existence in front of the three fillies replacing the stone wall that laid before them mere seconds before. "Welcome to the Foal-Hole." Dinky said with a smirk as she opened the door which allowed what sounded like muffled music to come out.
"Wait, the what?!" Sweetie Belle asked in astonishment before she was shoved through the doorway and the once muffled music suddenly assaulted her eardrums at full blast before she unicorn could even stand to all fours.
Once she had however, the unicorn gawked in shock as she looked around herself. The room which was massive, was doused in a dark blue light with green neon lights being flung around the room seemingly at random. The floor looked completely wooded with a collection of pool tables, regular tables, and something Sweetie Belle had only seen in Rarity's adult magazines.
A dancer's pole.
Colts and fillies alike populated this place as many danced to the beat of the loud music while others sat what what Sweetie Belle could have swore was a bar. "Is that colt serving alcoholic drinks?!" Sweetie Belle blurted out with a shocked look as she walked a young earth pony serve a filly large glass of something.
It was by this point that Dinky had walked up beside her and much to Sweetie Belle's shock heard what she said. "Depends on if the pony's of age or not, Belle." Dinky said with a smirk although Sweetie Belle barely was able to make her words out.
"Define, of age!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed with a mild glare at the unicorn.
"Put it this way. If the pony can walk out of here acting sober, they're of age." The other filly that Sweetie Belle saw earlier said as she walked past her with a wry smirk.
"Follow me, Belle." Dinky said with a smirk as she motioned for the unicorn to follow her which the unicorn did so.
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Dinky closed the door to what looked to be a private room complete with chairs and a table along with a light blue curtain that seemed to be strung around the walls of the room.
With the music now rendered to a muffled rumbling in the background, the unicorn found herself able to think straight which resulted in many questions coming to mind, the first of many can thundering out of her mouth before she could stop it.
"The buck was that?!" She exclaimed as she gestured towards the door with her right hoof as she stared at Dinky.
"I already told you what it's called." Dinky replied with a mildly confused look.
"No, I mean the pool tables, the music, the bar!" Sweetie Belle clarified in frustration.
"Oh! Your curious as to how we managed to hide this big club in a small town like Ponyville?" Dinky asked with a smirk.
"I know how you did it, I'm asking how and why the buck does this even exist?!" Sweetie Belle clarified once more, finally able to ask a clear question.
"That's a loaded question, Belle." Dinky replied with a smirk.
"Don't call me Belle, only my close friends can call me that." Sweetie Belle said tensely. She had ignored it till now but right now, she was in no mood to make generous allowances.
New chapter coming soon! For my new followers, I post these deleted scenes here to hold you all over while I get the real chapter out and so you know how hard I'm working on my fics!
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