Honest Opinions

My Warhammer series has gone great so far but I want your honest opinions. What would make it better?

Comments

[Lord Despair]

longer chapters

[Andy Soshal]

You really wanna know?
...MORE DAKKA!!! AND CARRIDGES!! RED ONES! DOSE GO FASTA!!!!

[Valiant Charge]

3674008 oop sorry dude. no warboss means no WAAGH! PM me a list of warbosses please?

[Valiant Charge]

3673886 trying to work that out. Writing this stuff puts a real strain on the brain.

[Andy Soshal]

3674015 Wot? WOT?! OI, LISSEN, YA GROT!! YA NEEDS TA REED UP ON YA ORK KULTUR AN' COME UP WIV IDEAS YASELF!
gimme a few minutes

[Lord Despair]

3674018 Try writing 14,000 words for an single chapter that's a real pain bro

[Valiant Charge]

3674021 I don't seez YOU comin up wid something YA STUPID GIT!! Use yer skull fer something other than thumpin!!! Thanks.

[Valiant Charge]

3674026 it is when you write it as it comes to you.

[Lord Despair]

3674029 that's how I write my friend I don't make outlines I only place whose pov I'm writing in and it's go from there

[Andy Soshal]

3674028 Oh, look at the liddle squiggy, finkin'' 'e's all growed up! Oi don't need ta fink when Oi got me a luvverly Stompa ta moosh yer arse into a bogey onna rock! So go a'ead an' blow it out yer ear'ole, ya liddle gobshite, 'fore I blowz it for yez, or me name ain't Smashum Bonesplinta!

So dere! Now git ourrafit, afore Oi uhmit a nokshuss ehflooveeyum in da jenrull direckshun of ya fruntull craneeyull area!

Actually, do you want me to look them up, or make some up and let you use them; I'm pretty good at coming up with Ork names, if I do say so myself...

[Valiant Charge]

3674041 real names would be nice. Orkz have TERRIBLE spelling! It's a wonder they can talk!

[Andy Soshal]

3674141 On it.

Ya grot.

Don't need good spellin' when ya have Dakka and Stompas.

[Titan Commander Sebaste]

Bring in more of the lesser known races in Equestria