My true alias is Dreagonight, the Dreaded Dragon Knight, but my friends just calls me dreago, the reckless Mystic Dragon-Knight
So The Lost Siren spin-off, The Painful Siren, well, failed. I knew the story wouldn't do well, but, I didn't expect this
. There not many comment on it so I don't know why the few that did read it didn't like it.
So I'm asking you ponies, readers of The Lost Siren, how do you feel about this spin-off.
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here`s my opinion it has good story bases but somethings in my head just don't click but as well the story has promise just... i don't really know i don't mind the death part because well somethings need to be avenged as well most of it was in self-defense somethings in the story could work like a vengeance based driven mind to protect those who you keep close to your heart that is what i liked to keep those who you love out of harms way but some parts like suicidal thoughts kind of puts me on edge but as i said it has potential and that is what i like it has good concept and tells more on the world it self and the characters that live there, that is what i think i am also sorry if i offend you in anyway.
3531793 There no offense to this, and I like what you said, I will keep that in mind for the future. I never written a dark story before, or ever thought about writing dark, so I didn't know what I was doing wrong and the sense. I can write said, but dark is a problem for me.
3531800 your welcome and as well if you need help writing dark i know a few tricks that i learned from writing creepy pastas... yes i wrote creepy pastas laugh it up but in all serious facts what you got to do is mix a bit of sad with a little bit of fear that's how i learned the concept, that and a friend of mine taught me how to write them and i thank him for that but anyway if you need some help just ask im willing to help.
3531807 Thanks, I'll keep that, and your name, and mind incase something in the future comes up.
3531825 alright just remember that i am here to help if you need it.
I wouldn't call it a failure. It didn't get the love it should have, but it was a good story, just really dark, which is off putting to a lot of folks here. But you got my fave - though I sure hope Sonata doesn't end up going all completely Angel of Death.
Even if she does though I'd still be along for the ride. 
3533154 Well, lucky for you, you did get the full version then, cause the full version is... Yandere Physchonata